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Misaal da meene me dunya ta pregda.
Salgai waham oss me jara ta pregda.
Janana sta de khushali shi naseeb.
Za yam adat ghamona maata pregda...
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The Secret To Eternal Life: Live Life To The Fullest, And Help All Others To Do So. The Meaning of Life Is Choice. Increase choice through direct perception.
Ka Pa Oor Me Swazawe No Za Tayar Yem
Ka Jwanday Me Khakhawe No Za Tayar Yem
Da MIRWAIS Ghonde Khesta Zama Janana
Ka Pa Dar Me Khejawe No Za Tayar Yem
Khesta Yara Dar Pa Dar Hara Kosa Ke
Ka Me Khair Ta Kenawe No Za Tayar Yem
Da Raqib Pa Las Me Ma Wajna Janana
Ka Me Ta Halalawe No Za Tayar Yem…
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The Secret To Eternal Life: Live Life To The Fullest, And Help All Others To Do So. The Meaning of Life Is Choice. Increase choice through direct perception.
^ i don't like that poem at all. porta na katal oss d khanzerano kar sho.. just great.
sometimes a poet compares one thing with another to express his feeling for the that thing in a better way this method of expressing one's feeling is known as "Tashbeeh"....A good poet always uses tashbeeh in his writtings.... Da tashbeeh lughvee maana da mushabihat, pashan, pa tser.....yani yo seez da sa' khaas sifat pa waja da bal pa shaan garzawal che auredunkey ya lustunkey pa zrha' ke da hagha shee anzoor rawalee.....
ب د کوم صفت په وجه تشبيه ورکېږي. هغه صفت دې د يو نه په بل کښې ډېر وي چې په کلام کښې مبالغه پېدا کړي لکه دا شعر بيا مې چشمان لکه چېتر ورېږي چې په زړګي مې پېښور ورېږي (قلندر مومند) دې شعر کښې د اوښو بهېدلو تشبيه د چېتر د باران سره ورکړې شوې ده ځکه چې د سترګو نه ډېرې اوښې وبهېږي خو د چېتر د باران هسې نۀ شي کېدې او دې خصوصيت په شعر کښې شدت او مبالغه پېدا کړې ده.
No madam daa zaroori na' da che koma tashbeeh warkrey shee humm hagha sifat dey pa rikhtya hagha' seez key vee, laga mubaligha pakey vee. noo da above shair matlab dey che sanga da khanzeer satt(neck) na' vee au hamesha laandey gori dagha shaan shayir khpal raqeeb la pa khanzeer sara tashbeeh warkarey da......Heela da che staso warkotee ghondey zehin ta ba daa khabara prewatey wee au aayenda la para ba la bey zaaya aiteraazoono na parhez kaway
i know what personification is. thank you for the mini lecture anyways. a good poet also finds inspiration in better places rather than the mannerism of a pig. da ghat ghat saroono matlab sttar sttar aqloona na we..no za na pohegam chi khalak worbandey dumra fakher sa la kawe...enjoy your thread..taa ta d mobarak wee.
I am no bird, and no nest ensnares me.
non commercial would cost less if he was in charge himself which he plans on doing. right now it's n herat but soon it will be in qanadahar.
Meena sar ki sa asaana ghundi khkari
rasawal ye sar ta grana ghundi khkari
na hagha razi na zu warzam tapoos la
da qisa raata sa worana ghundi khkari
zra ki wai che laa hagasi jwande dey
maa che oweni hairanaa ghundi khkari
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The Secret To Eternal Life: Live Life To The Fullest, And Help All Others To Do So. The Meaning of Life Is Choice. Increase choice through direct perception.
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