Tappa/Landai Competition

[erlangner]

Da ZahroJam, nom ye da zahro jam de, kho tappo ke hagha malghalaray sheendee che--- ratolawal ye gran dee,
Sta da kahist guloona der dee
zolae me tanga, za ba koom koom tolawamma

Yousafzai pakhtun, ao Feroz Lala, ao bia de feroz lala da de malakand tareekhi pekha yadawal, der da qadar war dee.

Allah mo tol daghassay rokhana zroona sata.

AO da yao pakkay leekallee dee, che pa roja ke barbanday tappay ma wayae. Ma kho pakkay charta barbanda tappa na oleeda, kho har sarae da khpal zra pa stargo gori, che da cha da zra stargay randay wee, no hagha bas kha shae na weeni.

der kha, ao tolo na yao zal bia dera mananna.

[Yousafzai Pakhtun]

Pa surr saalu key gunah nishta
Gunah jeenai ke da chey shawley wawley zeena

@ Erlangner saib:

Soo wrazey makhkey da MQM mashar sok chey pa london ke naast dey kho da pakistan gham ye jarawee , Army ta da waak ikhtiyar akhisto balana warkarey wa chey tolo syasi gondono prey laanat waylee dey au wayele ye dee chey ka' Altaf saib sara da Pakistan domra gham dey noo london dey pregdee au pakistan ta dey raasheeee......Da altaf hussain dapra hagha tappa dera fit raazeeee chey:
Da ghama och laka sandda shom
Da cheetakay na pa darhai olagedama

[IamDZJ]

d marg astaze ma khpara sho
janana rasha armani la duniya zama

[Yousafzai Pakhtun]

Da toro stargo deedan raakra
Rabandey jor kra bya da khawro anbaaroona

[IamDZJ]

aqal d sar feker d zrra we
deedar d stargo d khole khey khabari weena

[Yousafzai Pakhtun]

Dolay ye odrawa ghamaaza
Chey ahkiree deedan ye okram bya dey zeena

[IamDZJ]

da sta salo zma kafan sha
che tor lahad rabandey gul o gulzar sheena

[Yousafzai Pakhtun]

Da surr saalu merman ta waya
Nor dey da jooblo zroono na' akhli azaaruna

[IamDZJ]

zrra ma pa dey khabara kha dey
chi da khaista badrang ba tol khawro la zeena

[Yousafzai Pakhtun]

Qabar mey sang ke warta jorh kray
Chey marawar jaanan pa gor key pukhla krama

[IamDZJ]

chi ywa zara pre na zayegi
zrrra paimana d yar d ghama garzawoma

[Yousafzai Pakhtun]

Akhtar ta dera khushalegam
Zama da yaar waada akhtar dey rabasheena

[Yousafzai Pakhtun]

zma pa sar dard dey kho
za khair yusufzai pashtun pa goley rakey.

(was that good a landai? my first try ever)

Shlombay jana......while making a tappa it should be kept in mind that the first line should have 9 syllables and the second one must have 13... Also a tappa/landai ends with "na" or "ma" :Like:

خلۀ د مُلا د لُور خوږه ده
د شکرانې چرګان ئې ټول خوړلي دينه

Now try once more....

[IamDZJ]

zma d yar dasey khanda da
d salo kalo marawar pukhla kaweena

[Yousafzai Pakhtun]

Khanda kavee yaari ye nishta
Tasha khanda da libaasi jeenako weena