Tappa/Landai Competition

[یاسمینه]

I am not an expert. You better ask members who use to post in this thread.
As i know first verse = 9 syllables, second = 13 and rhyme ending with -a (short a).

[Tjanaparh]

My question so is to everybody


So my problem is with the short A, as the syllables must be right

[Toramana]

Areva, interesting that Armenian language also has tappay. I thought this genre may only be found in Pashto.

[Tjanaparh]

Areva, interesting that Armenian language also has tappay. I thought this genre may only be found in Pashto.

It has not, its only Pashto! I simply tried to write something in Armenian, if I would know Pashto I would have written in Pashtto. But I love the sound of Tappay, really perhaps the most nice poetry form I heard!

[Naveed Safi]

yao warai bia pa dai lar rasha
pa pakhwano palo* de prewatal garduana

Pal means footprints

[Arooj Khan]

دومره په حسن غرور مه کړه
حسن د ژمي مازيګر دې تېر به شينه

[Breshna]

Welcome back Arooj khan.

[Digital Malang]

urbal de yaw taraf ta kog ka wai
de makh da lande rata khwashe ka mayana

[Digital Malang]

bya ba zma lare ta gore
ma ba toba sta la yari estali weena

[~Gangster~]

Mina Mina nashta thol ghamoona de
tabe de, tukhe de,zukamoona de
kala me pa zra kala pa sar dard we
za yam, daktaran de, elajoona de
nur me sa khwarak nashta che waye khwram
sre, spene golai de,sharbatoona de
gharq shwama, taba shwama, barbad shwama
za yam, clinic de ao testoona de

[Yousafzai Pakhtun]

کوه چې هر څۀ دې زړۀ غواړي
يو باچا خان بل پښتو ژبه نۀ پرېږدمه

[Arooj Khan]

زه به تل ستا په خاوره ننګ کومه
ته م ده پلار او د نيکه وطن ي

بل په دوښمن به دے انګار کړمه زه
زمونږه خوږه پاکستان وطنه

[Yousafzai Pakhtun]

پښتو مې ګل زۀ يې نغمه يم
دَ باچا خان دَ باغ سپرلي سمسورومه