Your own poems

[Sheenka]

yeah u did
kho darza pa zai bal word use ka :D

like its that easy to do that :D

[AnGaaR]

^ok

just uploaded this song.. better all of u watch lol

[Sheenka]

Lolx m a n a n a

[Yousafzai Pakhtun]

awww
Really nice tanksssss

Whats darshal?

Durshal/Darshal ...Urdu key che warta "Dehleez" ya "Chokat" waayee.....Doorstep.....

[Yousafzai Pakhtun]

@ Future Poet of Afg

Well i like your english poems.....i have written a few in english but my english not that good , so i dont' like them...will post one which i think is better ...

[Roshina]

@ Future Poet of Afg

Well i like your english poems.....i have written a few in english but my english not that good , so i dont' like them...will post one which i think is better ...

Yusupzai! Don't worry! Share them anyway. Some of us are more expressive in Pashto and others in English -- others in other languages. That doesn't prevent us from sharing them :D Like my "ta laare da bal cha shwe" poem!

You can help me with my Pashto poetry and I can help you with your English poetry. Wanna work together?

[Yousafzai Pakhtun]

Yusupzai! Don't worry! Share them anyway. Some of us are more expressive in Pashto and others in English -- others in other languages. That doesn't prevent us from sharing them :D Like my "ta laare da bal cha shwe" poem!

You can help me with my Pashto poetry and I can help you with your English poetry. Wanna work together?

"Lets Give Hands to each other"
Thanks Qrratugai! for encourging me!!!
You are right some of the members are good in pashto writing and some in english......but alas! za kho na da deen yam au na da saadeen..lol...Neither i am good in English nor i am satisfied with my Pashto writings so far....Khair...will share a poem here (having a lot of grammatical and other mistakes, i think if i have expressed the feeling in the poem in Pashto that would have been a good poem)
BTW your poem "ta larey da bal cha shwe" made me laugh...and i hope my this one will be funny for you tooo.....lol..kidding...


"Let's give hands to one another"
You, a new blooming bud on the branch of life
awaiting for the morning dew so pure
inflamed i with thy love so cruel
All alone on the afternoon of youth so hot
all the assets of my life is your love and indulgence
my life entrusted by your hope

Your red lips complaining against the fate so damned
i being subjected to the prison of circumstances
Time keeping us apart from one another

How long shall we live on hopes
Let's give hand to one another
lets sprinkle our lives with the colors of our wishes
and gratify our ambitions,
Let's give hand to one another

(Yousafzai :Feb 21st 2009)

[Roshina]

"Let's give hands to one another"
You, a new blooming bud on the branch of life
awaiting for the morning dew so pure
inflamed i with thy love so cruel
All alone on the afternoon of youth so hot
all the assets of my life is your love and indulgence
my life entrusted by your hope

Your red lips complaining against the fate so damned
i being subjected to the prison of circumstances
Time keeping us apart from one another

How long shall we live on hopes
Let's give hand to one another
lets sprinkle our lives with the colors of our wishes
and gratify our ambitions,
Let's give hand to one another

(Yousafzai :Feb 21st 2009)

Nice! That was actually a very "colorful" ready, wrora I liked it! It has a touch of Pukhto poetry style as well, which makes it even more pleasant.

Keep writing more and more!

[Sheenka]

oh great plzz
share them
and btw u r english is great even if it wasnt its not our langauge :D we should be proud of oursleves coz an english person will never learn pashto in their whole life

:D my pashto is so weak and plus mixed however easy to understand LOL

[AnGaaR]

for sheenkay



khalk yai ra tol kro nandarai ta chei AnGaaR khaijawei
Da khplai khawrai aw de meenai khidmatgar khaijawei

Paighlai ba wokheijei par bam da tamashai da para
Ma bai guna ba pe ewaz da gunagar khaijawei

Da sahar kharra ba razei da ghar gharai maidan ta
Mata maloma raqiban mai pa nahar khaijawei

Ahh ba mai wa nawrei pakhton yem da pakhto sharmaigum
Khalek pohaigei chei da zchebai khidmatgar khaijawei

Da plar gatalai haqq trai ghwarum prai munkir dai zalim
Ghulaman gora woo pansei ta khpal badar khaijawei

[Sheenka]

angaar deera manna u made poem for me :D
but its realky hard u know im not gd in reading pashto i can only read what i write :p

[Feroza_Banu]

^loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool!...

[Sheenka]

ferozi khori wali domra wagod looooool
I dont this poem he copied it :P

[Feroza_Banu]

^lol no he its just that he wrote it for you and then u said i can't even read it... i found it kindaaa funny lol

[AnGaaR]

damn i m sooooooooandand

feroza dont laugh