Your own poems

[spogmai shaglay]

these lines i liked very much in the above poem posted by Osho....

zrha me liwaney dey zama rooh yaw diwana
za yawa marghai yam kho me neshta ashyana

za yaw musafar yam kho na laram manzal
tol jahan zama dey kho heis na laram khpa

[pukhtana]

Beautiful job Feroz.

[AnGaaR]

Beautiful feroz lala
I am trying or lets say learning and if u will keep helping me, Inshallah i will gain so much from you..


I wrote this one.. lets see what you say about this one


This is about a SOn who is injured and going to Die.. His father is sitting near him and wants him to die peacefully......


Za bacheya khudai dai mal sha da janat wokra sailona
Halta hoorai ghaniman dei da sharabo dak sindonaa


Da dunya hamaish fani da na zama shwa naba sta shei
Halta warsha dei Khwandoona da nasho na dak jamona
.
Da bulbulo chunahar da harai khwata ya guftar da
Har insan par insan gran da Da Allah kra deedarona
.
Na ba tsok parta Krei zulm na ba ta na tsok gila krei
Har yaw kas ba wei khushala aw hamaish ba krei shukruna
.
Bas dai nor nasiat dai bas dai stargai patai kra aw lar sha
Da gharib AnGaaR ham khlas sho da qalam da zda dardona (wanted to use Rangona)

[Sheenka]

My poems r out of the place
how sad im out lol

[Roshina]

My poems r out of the place
how sad im out lol

Sheenkay, if you write a lot, go ahead and have all of your poems in one particular thread that'd be dedicated to your poems only - if you'd like it better that way.

This applies to all members, since the poems sorta "get lost" or out of place after a few hours or days.

ORR you can just create a new thread for each poem you share with us; that's an option as well, yeah?

[Roshina]

Feroz Lala is a famous poet. He writes poems for Rahim Shah.

Wow! I knew he was famous and very talented, but I didn't know he also wrote for Rahim Shah :O Good job, Peroz lala! We're very proud of you!

[Feroz Afridi]

thanks..
manana

qrataney

YA Qurbaan is my poem.hahhahah

sheenkey bibi
khpal poem ma ta rawalega za ba ye drust kam..aw dam ba ham pe wachawam.


angaar yaara


staso nazam key da takhayul tasalsul dair qawi dey kho dasey naseehat andaz mey khwakh na sho...

[AnGaaR]

feroz lala i try
Inshallah kha ba shum bas dwa rata kawa

[Sheenka]

Sheenkay, if you write a lot, go ahead and have all of your poems in one particular thread that'd be dedicated to your poems only - if you'd like it better that way.

This applies to all members, since the poems sorta "get lost" or out of place after a few hours or days.

ORR you can just create a new thread for each poem you share with us; that's an option as well, yeah?

nah, its fine sis
im just jokking :D

[akbarkhan]

Not really poems, but random prose I wrote back in them joyful days

I am walking away from city lights
In search of wonder like nomads
For simplicity I strive
O what of this world
And its deceitful ornaments
Where minds are imprisoned in darkness
And pens ink without rational thought
Seven seas can’t quench my thirst
Greed please! don’t hold me back
I am seeking a divine drop

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Past be witness, I was a wild raging wind
Tales of twisted quests, but i made amend
Now I am humble like a quite summers lake
And she is the moon shining on my surface
The pious lady eases a smile onto my face
Darling's eyes are deep and dark as space

[IamDZJ]

some love one, some love two
i love none, not even you
-Big Fat Lie

[AnGaaR]

^ good one..
lol

[Sheenka]

some love one some love two
i love one thats u sheenkay
LOL

i heard this one lol

[AnGaaR]

a line of my poem

Stargai dai ra warawa ashna za sharabi yema
Neskam da jamona da deidan yai kha shawqi yema

[abubaker]

la husan di dumra muthasir shwam guli, chi azghi mi tol la yada au watal

au kala chi khabar shwama azgh na ashna, da zldagi sar mi tol surai surai wa