Your own poems

[Sheenka]

That would make *one* amazing poem. Wow ...

yah give it a try loolz

let me think


de zond pa talaash ki za somra marg ta nagde raghla ma
kala che me da fekar waka veeridama che za cheri raghl am

za de se saffar pa tarf laram che kum manzal nalari ye

LOL thats like translating it

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oSeN2Kn0MAc

[Yousafzai Pakhtun]

pakhtun lala shayar ye?
amizing how u managed to make it onto a poem

LOL

Shaayir Banaya aap ney..

Ganey maa shayiri sa kawala?

[Yousafzai Pakhtun]

Good poem.. let me tell you that you changed the words or the line she asked for.. u changed raza raza to rasha rasha..oh and ur first line is always longer than ur 2nd line.. try to make them equal..
allover great poem.. and tfs

Mara time raasara kam woo ..i realise it...
Oss ba ye teek kam:

Pa speen makh torey zulfey wal wal pregda rasha rasha
Da meeney pa durshal mey qadam kegda rasha rashaa

Daaa sheenkay che koma qaafia raateenga karey wa...pa dey ba da cha plar poem jor kee

Hasey da "Maqtaa" Bara key dey sa khyal dey?
Goodar ta che raazey , da yousafzai da zrha dapara
pa sar dey soor saalu da malmal pregda rasha rasha

@Shlombay
am waiting for your comments...kho DZJ ta unaway....hagha comments mey na dee pakar...lol

[AnGaaR]

^Os sam sho :D wah wah

[Sheenka]

awww
Really nice tanksssss

Whats darshal?

[Feroz Afridi]

قطعه

چې د سمې لار منزل رانه خطا شو
دا د چا د لاسه وختم په غرونو ؟
څه د وخت څپيړو اواهلم بې حده
څه د ستا د لاسه وختم په غرونو

[Punjabi]

what does qaafia mean?

[Feroz Afridi]

څو به کوڅه په کوڅه در په در ذليل او خوار يو
مونږه وختونو خيژولي د سفر په دار يو

د نامعلومه منزل هره ورځ تکل چې کوي
مونږه ورک شوي مسافر د هغې ورکې لار يو

[Feroza_Banu]

^shabash Feroza

thanks... yeah i wrote it... and he stole it from me.

[Sheenka]

Once upon a time ago,
There was a lonely princess,
Then came her way a handsome young prince,
Who stole her very breath away,
All of the sudden something magical happened,
Her tears were replaced with smiles,
Her sorrows were replaced with joys,
Her silence was replaced with laughter,
She replaced him with you,
She didnt even think twice,
Then came her way a dark storm,
Which could not be defeated,
Now its the other way around,
Promises are now replaced with lies,
Smiles are replaced with tears,
Laughter is replaced with memories,
Her only companion is the long, lonely, silent night,
She is questioned about her tear stained cheeks,
& shes speechless as to how she should answer,
Matters of the heart are beyond her mothers understanding,
The water of the ocean is nothing when compared to her tears,
Shes never met anyone like you,
Who said that was a good thing?
Your like a stubborn impossible puzzle,
She can't seem to figure you out!
She wonders if her soul is the only lonely one out there...
Even the moon keeps her promise,
She faithfully creeps out and shines in the dark night sky,
But tonight even the moon is no where to be found,
She dreads being the witness once again,
To that princess' tears, even the moon is tired,
The night sky stares back at me blankly, saying nothing at all,
Tonight even the dark night sky will suffer with her,
It will break down, it will release its sorrow by raining down on everyone,
After what seems like forever she falls asleep,
Only to wake up to another gloomy morning,
& my tear stained pillow & i pine for you all over again...



i made it last night in 2 seconds LOL
POET: SHEENKAY

[Espresso]

Music is my passion , it touches my soul with sprinklings of slumber memories. How far can i dance in my own rhythms is a dilemma covered with an ecstasy i can hardly escape no matter how much i try i end up in that blissful lane.....

[AnGaaR]

Great job sheenkay and feroz lala

[Sheenka]

THANKS ANGAR LALA

will we get award for that?


btw u still didnt changed that poem
let me ask feroz khan lala to complete it LOL


and thats wat i fink it shuld be

the meene pa manzal de kadam kida raza
ma darta newali de zara berta darwaza
LOL

[AnGaaR]

^ yaw zal kho mai darta woleiko lol
khair za ba yai bia da sara derta woleikum complete poem.. Hila da chei kha rashei..

[Sheenka]

afghanistan

Roses are red
afghanz are brown
thats my race
so don't put it down!!
My afghanz pride
It will not hide
My afghan race
I will not disgrace
My afghan blood
flows hot & true
My afghan peeps
I will stand by you
thru thick & thin
till the day we die
Our afghan flag
Always stands so high
I yell this poem
Louder than all the rest.
cuz every 1 knows
afghanz ARE THE BEST!!!
afghan Pride in my mind
afghan BLOOD is my kind
So step aside and let me through
Cuz its all about the afghan crew
Life a bitch and then u die
but if you're afghan
You die with good ass pride!!!
DECENT


peot: $heenkay

the future poet of afg