Your own poems

[Feroz Afridi]

غلط دے کنه
هاهاهاها
منزل او مزل کښې بائيد فرق وي کنه انګاره۔

منزل هدف ته وائي
او مزل هدف ته د ورتلو هغه لارې باندې تللو ته وائي۔
چې فاهميدي؟

[Feroz Afridi]

د مينې په مزل دې قدم کيږده او راځه
منزل ته به رسيږي هرڅُه پريږده او راځه

[Yousafzai Pakhtun]

de meeni pa manzal ki qadam kida raza, raza

raza raza raza

complete it LOL

Pa speen rukhsaar dey torey zulfey wal wal pregda rasha rasha
Da meeney pa durshal dey qadam kegda rasha rashaa

Da dashto lewaney yam, sta yaadoono bandey payam
ka rekhteeney meena kay no, mahal pregda rasha rasha

Da stargo dewey baley, sta da ratlo pa intizaar yam
spha tera shwa sahar sho, chal wal pregda rasha rasha

Zama da zrha tooti dey pa chaghar bandey raghley lag ye wawra
Qissa oss da Boora au bulbul pregda rasha rasha

Goodar ta che raazey, da "Yousafzai" da zrha da para
Pa sar dey soor saalo da Malmal Pregda rasha rasha.

I just managed to write the above lines in a short time, so may need some corrections......i wanted to add some more .....kho bya ba nawakhta shee.

Looking for comments from Angaar, Feroz Afridi, Qrratugai, Shlombay and others....

Manana,
Yousafzai

[Sheenka]

pakhtun lala shayar ye?
amizing how u managed to make it onto a poem

my dad makes poem as well once he made one on me but it had loads of negtive points LOL

[Sheenka]

poetss mashallah im proud of guys keep it up gd job

Btw can some1 give a try to make a poem like
Zindagi ki talaash main hum mot ki kitani pass aggaye

[AnGaaR]

غلط دے کنه
هاهاهاها
منزل او مزل کښې بائيد فرق وي کنه انګاره۔

منزل هدف ته وائي
او مزل هدف ته د ورتلو هغه لارې باندې تللو ته وائي۔
چې فاهميدي؟

famida shud kaka jan lol

[AnGaaR]

Pa speen rukhsaar dey torey zulfey wal wal pregda rasha rasha
Da meeney pa durshal dey qadam kegda rasha rashaa

Da dashto lewaney yam, sta yaadoono bandey payam
ka rekhteeney meena kay no, mahal pregda rasha rasha

Da stargo dewey baley, sta da ratlo pa intizaar yam
spha tera shwa sahar sho, chal wal pregda rasha rasha

Zama da zrha tooti dey pa chaghar bandey raghley lag ye wawra
Qissa oss da Boora au bulbul pregda rasha rasha

Goodar ta che raazey, da "Yousafzai" da zrha da para
Pa sar dey soor saalo da Malmal Pregda rasha rasha.

Good poem.. let me tell you that you changed the words or the line she asked for.. u changed raza raza to rasha rasha..oh and ur first line is always longer than ur 2nd line.. try to make them equal..
allover great poem.. and tfs

[*Mahzala*]

poetss mashallah im proud of guys keep it up gd job

Btw can some1 give a try to make a poem like
Zindagi ki talaash main hum mot ki kitani pass aggaye

That would make *one* amazing poem. Wow ...

[Sheenka]

afridi what langauge is that ?
:S
i didnt get a word of it :D

[Feroza_Banu]

^that was his attempt at Dari lol

[Sheenka]

Herati girl.. i dono how we make poems,all i know is that i eat my heart and brain when i write...

Sheenkay

Da meenai pa manzal ki qadam kida aw raza
Pa dwaro laso khlasa mai neewolai darwaza


sam sho?

deer kha, manna
kho darwaza change ka
it would sound better

[Feroz Afridi]

de meeni pa manzal ki qadam kida raza, raza
raza raza raza

complete it LOL

څوک چې نوے نوے عاشق شي يا نوے نوے شاعر شي نو رومانوي شعرونه ئې خوښيږي

زما يو شعر چې هم دغه احساس پکښې منعکس دے


لا بلد نه يو د رقيبو هواګانو سره
مونږه د عشق د جالې نوے نوے پر وهلے

که خوښ مو شو نو بيا به پوره غزل نوشته کړم۔

[Sheenka]

^that was his attempt at Dari lol

thanks ferozi jane
i thought it was dari then i read it again i was like its not LOL

[Sheenka]

څوک چې نوے نوے عاشق شي يا نوے نوے شاعر شي نو رومانوي شعرونه ئې خوښيږي

زما يو شعر چې هم دغه احساس پکښې منعکس دے

لا بلد نه يو د رقيبو هواګانو سره
مونږه د عشق د جالې نوے نوے پر وهلے


که خوښ مو شو نو بيا به پوره غزل نوشته کړم۔

yap, manna
plzz continue it

[Sheenka]

^post it

i've lost it, looked for it in my book i couldnt find it