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    "Caught in the Middle"

    We have all heard the saying "If you are not with us, you are against us". In the game of war you are expected to take sides especially if the battlefield is in your backyard. If you dare try to defy this rule, wanting to mind your own business, one or both sides will unfairly brand you as an enemy and make your life of being caught in the middle a living hell. It has always been this way and always will. It is on one such battlefield that countless innocent Pashtuns, among them being Faisal Mahsud, have found themselves.

    Faisal was born in Makeen, South Waziristan. With his green-gold eyes and shoulder length dark brown curls he was a handsome family man with an upbeat disposition who ran a small garage with his elder brother. Faisal was very proud of being a Pashtun especially one from the Maseed tribe as the Mahsuds called themselves. The Mehsuds were historically famous for their bravery, their devotion to Islam and for strictly following the Pashtun Code of Honour called Pashtunwali. Nearly 400,000 in number the Mahsud make up one of the largest tribes in the Federally Administered Tribal Area of which South Waziristan is a part.

    For years in this breath-takingly beautiful mountainous land bordering Afghanistan, foreign fighters with their puritanical, oppressive form of Islam had been given shelter by a few various strong tribal leaders. Those who spoke out against this new version of Islam which was introduced and implemented by the foreigners were now threatened, beheaded or hung. Their dead and sometimes mutilated bodies would then left in some public place to serve as a warning to others. Faisal, like most, quickly learned to keep his opinion to himself. Expressing the wrong one to the wrong person meant danger not just for yourself but for your immediate family as well and Faisal being a husband and father always kept that in his mind. Life was becoming more and difficult and stressful in Waziristan in the years after 9/11 especially after America started her drone attacks against suspected Al-Qaida and taliban militants but despite this and the occasional Pakistani army ground offensive this was Faisal's home and that was enough of a reason for him to want to stay here despite the increasing danger around him.

    All that changed though on June 23, 2009. In what was the deadliest strike since the drone attacks had started, 83 members of a funeral procession, only some who were actually militants, were killed in the city of Makeen. It was on that day, thinking of the safety of his wife and baby daughter, that Faisal first thought about leaving. Because of the actions and allegiances of a few members of his tribe like Baitullah Mahsud, the leader of Tehrik-i-Taliban Pakistan suspected in the assassination of Benazir Bhutto, being a Mahsud had unfairly became synonymous with being a Taliban militant.

    Just two weeks before the air strike on Makeen, the district magistrate of South Waziristan issued an order that said: "I, the political agent/district magistrate, South Waziristan Agency in exercise of the power conferred upon me under section 21-FCR, do hereby order the seizure where they may be found of all members of Mahsud Tribe and confiscation of moveable/immovable property belonging to them in NWFP and their arrest and taking into custody any person of the tribe wherever he is found." Quite absurdly and unfairly, according to an old colonial British law adopted by Pakistan, an entire tribe could and were being held accountable for the actions of a few. Faisal and his entire family were now enemies of the state of Pakistan just for being Mahsud.

    As if thing were not bad enough, the Pakistani army announced an upcoming ground offensive to try to drive the Taliban completely out of South Waziristan as they had recently done in Swat. Immediately ,weeks of heavy aerial bombardments on villages thought to be terrorist strongholds began .Civilians were told to leave. With a heavy heart, Faisal, his wife, his baby and his elder brother and his family left Makeen to find shelter. He had no idea that the worst was yet to come.

    When they reached Dera Ismail Khan, a town in N.W.F.P (now renamed as Khyber-Pakhtunkwa ) they were astounded by the over 300,000 internally displaced persons (IDP's) already there. They were directed at a check-point as to where they needed to go to register.They didn't know this yet but the Pakistani army had restricted the establishment of camps for the Waziristan IDP's on the grounds that they would offer jihadi groups easy access to recruits but for members of the Mahsud tribe living in a camp was not even an option. The N.W.F.P. administrators required Mahsuds to be registered and be accommodated in private homes and the host families that took them in then had to assume legal responsibility for them. This was done so that the host family would keep a close eye on the Mahsuds and report anything suspicious to the army or police.

    Reluctantly they made their way through the crowd to get to the registration center. Conditions were dirty, chaotic and miserable with children begging and women crying. Faisal wondered to himself if he had made a mistake leaving Makeen to come here. The lines to register and for food distribution were unbelievably long and from time to those in them even women, children and the elderly were being beaten by baton wielding policemen. Faisal's charming disposition quickly turned into one of rage witnessing all of this. When one of these policemen came near his wife, Faisal could not control himself. As the policeman raised his baton to strike her, Faisal grabbed it with one hand and punched the officer with the other knocking him to the ground. Before his wife even knew what was going on, a single shot rang out. Faisal immediately fell to the ground. Another innocent Pashtun was dead. One among thousands killed after finding themselves caught in the middle of someone else's war.




    Last edited by Guest; 07-05-2010, 10:03 AM.

  • #2
    Excellent Work

    10/10

    Kind Regards

    Brother Maseed

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    • #3
      Maseed wrora
      I am so grateful to you because it was your passionate poetry that made me want to learn more about where you are from and more about what your tribe has been through. I hope someday you will write stories too.

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      • #4
        I am starting to think you are a professional writer under disguise, Good job. I read it and actually learned from it.

        So what more can I say besides mission accomplished.
        Even Adobe Photoshop can't change me.

        A line[Durrand line] of hatred that raised a wall between the two brothers -Hamid Karzai

        For generations, the Hindus of India prayed for deliverance from "the venom of the cobra, the teeth of the tiger and the vengeance of the Afghan."


        The men of Kábul and Khilj also went home; and whenever they were questioned about the Musulmáns of the Kohistán (the mountains), and how matters stood there, they said, "Don't call it Kohistán, but Afghánistán; for there is nothing there but Afgháns and disturbances." Thus it is clear that for this reason the people of the country call their home in their own language Afghánistán, and themselves Afgháns. The people of India call them Patán; but the reason for this is not known. But it occurs to me, that when, under the rule of Muhammadan sovereigns, Musulmáns first came to the city of Patná, and dwelt there, the people of India (for that reason) called them Patáns—but God knows!

        -Ferishta, 1560–1620

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        • #5
          Thank you Admin Khan. I am so happy you learned something. I learned a lot too writing this. I still find it incredible that a whole tribe was mistreated and punished because of the actions of a few.

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          • #6
            Originally posted by Lewanai Anjalai View Post
            Thank you Admin Khan. I am so happy you learned something. I learned a lot too writing this. I still find it incredible that a whole tribe was mistreated and punished because of the actions of a few.
            Unfortunately,That's what happens. I would say 80percent of the hardships and tortures those tribesmen have witnessed have gone unreported.
            Even Adobe Photoshop can't change me.

            A line[Durrand line] of hatred that raised a wall between the two brothers -Hamid Karzai

            For generations, the Hindus of India prayed for deliverance from "the venom of the cobra, the teeth of the tiger and the vengeance of the Afghan."


            The men of Kábul and Khilj also went home; and whenever they were questioned about the Musulmáns of the Kohistán (the mountains), and how matters stood there, they said, "Don't call it Kohistán, but Afghánistán; for there is nothing there but Afgháns and disturbances." Thus it is clear that for this reason the people of the country call their home in their own language Afghánistán, and themselves Afgháns. The people of India call them Patán; but the reason for this is not known. But it occurs to me, that when, under the rule of Muhammadan sovereigns, Musulmáns first came to the city of Patná, and dwelt there, the people of India (for that reason) called them Patáns—but God knows!

            -Ferishta, 1560–1620

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            • #7
              You never cease to amaze me.

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              • #8
                God bless you!

                This is amazing work. I'm going to read it again.

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                • #9
                  I told you guys, shes a star

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                  • #10
                    A star? more like a professional writer. I loved it. I think I know you from somewhere.

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                    • #11
                      I can't help but laugh when you guys say professional writer but thank you Before I posted this story I had a few friends on PF read it and they corrected some of my grammar mistakes What I really wish and hope is that other members here will also start writing stories

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                      • #12
                        A very touching story, Anjalai! Thank you for sharing it here!

                        I've made many attempts at writing short stories, but none have been completed because I just go completely blank, or don't know how to say the rest of what's on my mind! So I know that not everyone can write short stories. If you can, it's a gift, and you should hold on to it strongly!

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                        • #13
                          Waziristan it means a lot to me that you and StrategistMaseed approved of this story. I hope one day to read stories from you both about the things that happened there that most of us still don't know.

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