Heart Touch poetry

[mayan]

Zama da marg Sta da Wada shpa pa uo ze raze
Zamung dremey pa uo zai v sok ba shpe la raze

sok thala gap la sok ba mala Adhreey tha raze
sok las niwaley sok ba tha la salamey la raze

sok ba zama da kat da pasa yo ghobal jora v
sok ba nakreezey thala ekdi tha la orbal jora v

sok ba kafan la sok ba srey banrasey la raze
khalaq ba mala janzaey la sta srey doley la raze

[DaZahroJaam.]

pakhtu sher, angreezi inwan aow d hinduwano aksona. khawra wukhra chi morr shey.

[Shehbaz Khan]

pakhtu sher, angreezi inwan aow d hinduwano aksona. khawra wukhra chi morr shey.

laka zama da neya (grandmom) di kheri shuro kari! sa chal day?

[DaZahroJaam.]

jang ta ye zrra shawey wo. He declared me a murtid. Preda chi shak ye pa yaqen badal kam chi pa zrra ki ye arman patey nashe.

[mayan]

pakhtu sher, angreezi inwan aow d hinduwano aksona. khawra wukhra chi morr shey.

Angreezi k signature angreez da hindu tasveer tha hum zan tha muslmana wai :P

[mayan]

laka zama da neya (grandmom) di kheri shuro kari! sa chal day?

de me lag tait kare de zaka

[DaZahroJaam.]

Angreezi k signature angreez da hindu tasveer tha hum zan tha muslmana wai :P

vakratudh ya mahakayaa ko tisuryasama prabaha
nirvignam kuru me diva sarvakaraay yeshu sarvadaaaaaaa

[mayan]

vakratudh ya mahakayaa ko tisuryasama prabaha
nirvignam kuru me diva sarvakaraay yeshu sarvadaaaaaaa

mata pata wa che tha hindu yi ,, , and dont text in pashto , Pashtu nama de osharmula

[Shehbaz Khan]

de me lag tait kare de zaka

Haha! khabari zda ka bachu awal!

[mayan]

Haha! khabari zda ka bachu awal!

da Gharsangey u :-/ khbaro chal na raze

[Shehbaz Khan]

da Gharsangey u :-/ khbaro chal na raze

pir saib! sta ao zama ghwandi shpeto la da yawa jenai dera da kha! try to respect people around .. tait kari etc etc isn't a fine way of talking!

[mayan]

pir saib! sta ao zama ghwandi shpeto la da yawa jenai dera da kha! try to respect people around .. tait kari etc etc isn't a fine way of talking!

hahhhaaha ashna 1st i am giving Respect to Every one , but aghe khpala dase khbrey oki che hurt de ki , zama yo post bande Zahro jaam dair ajeeba Comment kare wo , khu zaka me ghusa warta raghley wa, khair sorry to all

[Shehbaz Khan]

^ Nu hagha kho pa las ki da zahro jaam garzai! don't give her a reason to make you drink it :P

[mayan]

masra elaaj da zahro shte hahahah

[Badlun]

Zama da marg Sta da Wada shpa pa uo ze raze
Zamung dremey pa uo zai v sok ba shpe la raze

sok thala gap la sok ba mala Adhreey tha raze
sok las niwaley sok ba tha la salamey la raze

sok ba zama da kat da pasa yo ghobal jora v
sok ba nakreezey thala ekdi tha la orbal jora v

sok ba kafan la sok ba srey banrasey la raze
khalaq ba mala janzaey la sta srey doley la raze

Really heart dissolving but try to improve the diction . Phraseology like gap is not suitable in a serious poem like this one.

I really appreciate the excellent use of pathos, personification, paradox, hyperbole,antithesis and synecdoche.