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  • #1

    "Unwanted"

    I am alone and frightened
    in a new world I barely understand
    having fled the violence in my homeland

    I am hated and despised
    I am blamed when things go wrong
    told time and again that I don't belong

    I am an unwanted refugee
    Now here too, I must live in constant fear
    as my hopes for security start to disappear

    Am I really such a burden?
    Look at the anguish written upon my face
    and just be grateful you are not in my place
    living life as an unwanted     refugee
    struggling to survive
    praying to stay alive


    Last edited by Guest; 06-11-2010, 12:00 AM.
    Tags: unwanted
  • #2
    Written by you, Pishoo? ... Good job!!! Share more, will you?

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    • #3
      in years to come, you will hate yourself for writing this.
      when a depressed person writes down their true feelings they give themselves wounds...the scars of which will remain obvious in years to come..

      I am no bird, and no nest ensnares me.

      non commercial would cost less if he was in charge himself which he plans on doing. right now it's n herat but soon it will be in qanadahar.

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      • #4
        yes I felt inspired after reading about the deportations.......thank you

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        • #5
          ^ Yeah, I understand. I once wrote a Pashto poem on the IDPs as well ... and on our miseries in general. But I hated/hate it so much I have never wanted to share it with others, hah. I'm gonna translate it to English and then share it maybe.

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          • #6
            Wow, You truly are talented.
            Even Adobe Photoshop can't change me.

            A line[Durrand line] of hatred that raised a wall between the two brothers -Hamid Karzai

            For generations, the Hindus of India prayed for deliverance from "the venom of the cobra, the teeth of the tiger and the vengeance of the Afghan."


            The men of Kábul and Khilj also went home; and whenever they were questioned about the Musulmáns of the Kohistán (the mountains), and how matters stood there, they said, "Don't call it Kohistán, but Afghánistán; for there is nothing there but Afgháns and disturbances." Thus it is clear that for this reason the people of the country call their home in their own language Afghánistán, and themselves Afgháns. The people of India call them Patán; but the reason for this is not known. But it occurs to me, that when, under the rule of Muhammadan sovereigns, Musulmáns first came to the city of Patná, and dwelt there, the people of India (for that reason) called them Patáns—but God knows!

            -Ferishta, 1560–1620

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            • #7
              wow you wrote that? I am impressed.

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              • #8
                I absolutely loved it. Share more woman.

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                • #9
                  Dear its like the heart of a refugee poured out. Feels miserable just to read it. Cant even imagine what people feel who actually go through it. Great work. But makes me sad to read it. The pic that you have posted along. The child looks so innocent. Yara its really depressing.

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                  • #10
                    lewani did u made this poem>?

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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by sheenkay View Post
                      lewani did u made this poem>?
                      Yes I wrote that last night. Thank you all for the nice comments.

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                      • #12
                        As timbaktu said, beautiful written namuh khuda ...

                        khuday tala deh naara wowri ...

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                        • #13
                          Originally posted by pakistani
                          Can you share more with us?

                          we have so many poets here.

                          good job.
                          yeah we do MashaAllah =)

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                          • #14

                            mashallah well done
                            u r not lewani lolzz ta pa sora ye zaka poem liki
                            im really proud of u sista
                            keep it up may allah bless u

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                            • #15
                              Laiwanei.. nice very nice.. i really liked it

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