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[Gulalai]

she's not though....

["Khan Baba"]

Haha we 2 togethers. What's happen lala? Lol

["Khan Baba"]

khan is confused

["Khan Baba"]

She is dwarf I see him pic diferant place and he husband be kind for him and do that. I see tv dicumenries this couples. They are sweet couples. May Allah give happy them.

Gullalai bad parson tobah.

[Gulalai]

im confused too....

what are you talking about??? -_- LOL
sumra droughjan ye :S

[Haris]

Sahil,
The intro is good, the white and light blue make it look bright but then you go to the website and it looks all grey/beige, just the opposite. Don't get me wrong, the website is good - no need to change it but it's not what you would expect to see after the intro.

Also on the Products and Services page you have " achieve their goals and manager their risk", i don't know if grammatically manager can be used like that, but i'm not sure whether it should be manage or manager.

And you have "get the best investment deals within your capital frameworkWith" which doesn't make sense

Also you call your company white diamond investments alot when I think you should be calling it White Diamond Investments (with the capitals).

Also on your 'About' page you have "providing committed, innovative and consistent advice and execution to our clients at all times". This is just me being extra but you said 'and' twice. You should replace the second 'and' with '&' to make it fully grammatically neater.


Also you have different fonts on your pages. I think that's Verdana on 'About' but TimesNewRoman on 'Products & Services'

[Gulalai]

awwwww! loool

[sahil112]

Sahil,
The intro is good, the white and light blue make it look bright but then you go to the website and it looks all grey/beige, just the opposite. Don't get me wrong, the website is good - no need to change it but it's not what you would expect to see after the intro.

Also on the Products and Services page you have " achieve their goals and manager their risk", i don't know if grammatically manager can be used like that, but i'm not sure whether it should be manage or manager.

And you have "get the best investment deals within your capital frameworkWith" which doesn't make sense

Also you call your company white diamond investments alot when I think you should be calling it White Diamond Investments (with the capitals).

Also on your 'About' page you have "providing committed, innovative and consistent advice and execution to our clients at all times". This is just me being extra but you said 'and' twice. You should replace the second 'and' with '&' to make it fully grammatically neater.


Also you have different fonts on your pages. I think that's Verdana on 'About' but TimesNewRoman on 'Products & Services'

thankk you brother!! :D iv left it for today but tomz first ting when i start editing i shall hit on that :D

what did u get for english GCSE :O
man gt a B

[sahil112]

[Haris]

lol yeah English was my strongest subject, got an A in it and A* for the coursework.
I largely flopped my other subjects though.

Was gonna do English for A-Level but they only had Literature which is the sittest thing on Earth...just reading a bunch of poems, shakespeare and stories and then analysing them to freaking death

I'm like one of the few people who prefer essay writing lol, infact i'm working on a little project right now.

[sahil112]

lol yeah English was my strongest subject, got an A in it and A* for the coursework.
I largely flopped my other subjects though.

Was gonna do English for A-Level but they only had Literature which is the sittest thing on Earth...just reading a bunch of poems, shakespeare and stories and then analysing them to freaking death

I'm like one of the few people who prefer essay writing lol, infact i'm working on a little project right now.

i used to get into murder mode when it came to essays hated them above all thingz in skool LOL all i wanted 2 do was chill and discuss ahaha

[eyeliner]

lol yeah English was my strongest subject, got an A in it and A* for the coursework.
I largely flopped my other subjects though.

Was gonna do English for A-Level but they only had Literature which is the sittest thing on Earth...just reading a bunch of poems, shakespeare and stories and then analysing them to freaking death

I'm like one of the few people who prefer essay writing lol, infact i'm working on a little project right now.

english lit for A Level was crap.....

[Haris]

i used to get into murder mode when it came to essays hated them above all thingz in skool LOL all i wanted 2 do was chill and discuss ahaha

yeah, same for everyone in my school too...well except me lol

I always did well in the coursework but **** in the exam...hate exams with a passion

but those high school days were good, man could just relax, even with GCSEs if you just did last minute revision you could still come out with a decent grade

[Haris]

english lit for A Level was crap.....

Yeah, glad I didn't pick it everyone said its crap
If they had language I would have picked it without even thinking about it but they never had it so I picked politics instead

[sahil112]

i did my GCSE history revsion an hour befo the exam like i just skimmed all the info into my head quick tymm and gt an A