What put a smile on your face today?

[Manzareh]

why don't you tell me where i made the mistakes and show me the correct way of writing it?? i don't see anything wrong with it. you don't divide your sentence according to where you need to take a breath, dumbass.

You don’t see anything wrong with it? Well i'll tell you, you type like a convulsive robot and have sentences longer than the river Nile, that’s why your posts are a headache to read, if your posts are longer than a sentence or two people fall asleep. Work the rest out for yourself.

I didn’t say you divide your sentences according to where you need to take a breath, incase you didn’t notice, there was two separate questions in that post to you, dumbass.

[DaZahroJaam.]

You don’t see anything wrong with it? Well comma i'll tell you, dot instead of comma you type like a convulsive robot and have sentences longer than the river Nile, dot instead of comma that’s why your posts are a headache to read, dot instead of comma if your posts are longer than a sentence or two comma people fall asleep. (boohoo) Work the rest out for yourself.

I didn’t say you divide your sentences according to where you need to take a breath, dot instead of a comma incase in case, not incase you didn’t notice, there was two separate questions in that post to you, dumbass.

well structured sentences can be as long as one intends for them to be and it's also possible for multiple questions to be answered in one sentence. it requires for some practice and little magical tricks known as conjunctions.
you can't talk about three subjects in one sentence and throw commas whenever you think your sentences are getting too long.
they teach you that in third grade...

[Manzareh]

great! ive got a whole load of writing that you can proof read and correct

you can't talk about three subjects in one sentence....

Can't? well i just did, so deal with it.

[DaZahroJaam.]

dumbassed garbage man

[Admin Khan]

Completing my assignment.

[MostafaM]

DJZ,

why do you mock Manzareh for his writing skills if yours are somewhow weird, too?

Since you got your highschool diploma like 5 years after you should have been done with school, you are getting a little bit too cocky for my liking.

Leave the people here alone.

It´s not a spelling competition.

[Zakiah]

Finding my gorgeous watch back.

[Admin Khan]

^I'm still looking for a nice watch!

[Zakiah]

^I'm still looking for a nice watch!

For daily? Occasion wear or sports? And how much are u willing to pay for it?

For daily and affordable i would say citizen has best quality and look.

[DaZahroJaam.]

DJZ,

why do you mock Manzareh for his writing skills if yours are somewhow weird, too?

Since you got your highschool diploma like 5 years after you should have been done with school, you are getting a little bit too cocky for my liking.

Leave the people here alone.

It´s not a spelling competition.

my apologies, sir. sometimes i forget that the sole purpose of my existence lays upon carving a reality according to your "liking".

[Manzareh]

^ put a sock in it lav

[کیش]

my apologies, sir. sometimes i forget that the sole porpose of my existence lays upon carving a reality according to your "liking".

Hmm, procrastinating that the period should come before the quotation: "liking."

[HalloIsBack]

^I'm still looking for a nice watch!

i still don't get it why people need a watch if they have got a mobile phone and clocks are everywhere nowadays

it's only money wasting

[کیش]

Nothing like busting black people in basketball. #satisfaction #LongIsland

[Kushan Prince]

Nothing like busting black people in basketball. #satisfaction #LongIsland

Remind me to break your ankles in ball next time when i come to long island lol.