-i am not sure who your target readers are but there is a certain livelihood about the way you write which can work to your benefit if you choose to write for young adults.
-put as much amount of detail in describing most of your characters as you do to their surroundings and costumes. it brings the characters to life and helps the reader set up a believable environment for your story in their head.
-put as much amount of detail in describing most of your characters as you do to their surroundings and costumes. it brings the characters to life and helps the reader set up a believable environment for your story in their head.
