Salamoona Amir Jan,
As a physician, I am not a literary authority. I am sure that an English major or professional writer would cringe at my style. All I can offer is what most of us experience in the academic arena. I think this piece you wrote was a tremendous improvement. I'll mention one minor point that might help in another short message because this text box doesnt allow beyond a certain character count
As a physician, I am not a literary authority. I am sure that an English major or professional writer would cringe at my style. All I can offer is what most of us experience in the academic arena. I think this piece you wrote was a tremendous improvement. I'll mention one minor point that might help in another short message because this text box doesnt allow beyond a certain character count
