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Default 09-06-2012, 01:41 PM

Tappay in Armanian version(please do not get angry with me):


Yaris Achqer yerku almast en
Gharibi néman indz otar dardza ashkharhé



The translation:
The eyes of my beloved shine like diamonds
An to me like to a stranger the whole world became strange (I am not good enough in english)


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Default 09-06-2012, 01:46 PM

Achqerés togh qez linen pashtpan
Vétangits u karotic herru togh qez pahen



Lets my eyes be your defender
To keep you far away from danger and sorrow


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Default 09-06-2012, 01:55 PM

Martiké misht qaylum e araj
Hetev nayum en menak anardar achqeré


The fighter goes always forward, bach look only the eyes of the untrouthfull


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Default 09-06-2012, 02:03 PM

Arevapasht, are they Armenian landey? Pashto landey need -a rhyme
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Default 09-06-2012, 03:08 PM

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Arevapasht, are they Armenian landey? Pashto landey need -a rhyme
Should have a little ryme?
I only tried to make it similar to the form some have witten first!
If I faild tell me please more about the form I have to be carefull on


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Default 09-06-2012, 03:20 PM

I am not an expert. You better ask members who use to post in this thread.
As i know first verse = 9 syllables, second = 13 and rhyme ending with -a (short a).
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Default 09-06-2012, 03:21 PM

My question so is to everybody


So my problem is with the short A, as the syllables must be right


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Default 09-07-2012, 09:44 PM

Areva, interesting that Armenian language also has tappay. I thought this genre may only be found in Pashto.
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Default 09-07-2012, 09:47 PM

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Areva, interesting that Armenian language also has tappay. I thought this genre may only be found in Pashto.
It has not, its only Pashto! I simply tried to write something in Armenian, if I would know Pashto I would have written in Pashtto. But I love the sound of Tappay, really perhaps the most nice poetry form I heard!


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Smile 09-11-2012, 04:07 AM

yao warai bia pa dai lar rasha
pa pakhwano palo* de prewatal garduana

Pal means footprints


Za REHMAN da aagha ilm a pannah ghwarham…
Che la deena la mazhaba wee sewa…
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